MINDFULFITNESSMOVEMENT. "Does This Make My Abs Look Good?: The Top 4 Male Body Image Issues." Mind Fit Move. N.p., 26 Mar. 2013. Web. 28 Oct. 2013. <http://blog.mindfitmove.com/tag/does-this-make-my-abs-look-good-the-top-4-male-body-image-issues/>.
Caption: Does this make my abs look good?:
Introduction:
- Topic: the side effect of people's excessive desire for good body image.
- Oppinion: people can not rely only the artificial equipment.
- Oppinion: people can not rely only the artificial equipment.
- mapping: describe photo, respond to the caption with my opinion and example of it.
Development:
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- man siting on sofa and watching TV.
- looks comfortable &smiling
- having a equipment on his belly, called ab hancer, which enable men have a fake six pack.
- man siting on sofa and watching TV.
- looks comfortable &smiling
- having a equipment on his belly, called ab hancer, which enable men have a fake six pack.
- people want good outcome of body image in a short time without any effort as the photo
- people need to try hard themselves. ex: I have a friend in my home contry who tried to lose weight by drug. She failed and get more weight then before -> she eat more than before.
- similar with my contry. People want to have better body image but easily.
- Good result is not gain easily. People need to do exercises if they want to lose weight and have good body images
